This is what the result looked like on the big screen. You can easily make out the key elements of the composition, the enlarged water lily in the foreground and the tree in the background.
However, there is no connection between the two. Even worse, the midground is a mess and blocks the eye from moving up to the tree.
Composition is all about leading the eye from one point in the image to the most important part of the image, unless the subject is completely isolated and there is nowhere else the eye can look at anyway.
In that sense, this composition fails miserably.